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Here鈥檚 how to tell if you have a bad attitude, if your always thinking negatively, or you just don care, or your always angry about a mark, or at someone. Then chances are you鈥檝e got a negative attitude.

If this sounds like you then you should begin to change it at once. First don play the blame game it鈥檚 not your fault you say? Stop trying to pin the blame on others, it鈥檚 your fault. Try to locate the cause of the problem, if you鈥檝e know someone who鈥檚 always negative or just generally a bad person, you should try to stop hanging or talking with that person. Try to identify the problem at the source, and stop it. Maybe your just not being able to communicate with your friends and family, causing you to be mad or angry, which is the problem of your bad attitude. Try to smile more, people will a have a more positive impression when they see you smiling. Be patient you鈥檙e not going to change your attitude overnight. You need to rewire your mind to see the positive, which will take a lot of work and effort.Can someone edit this?!!!!!!!?Here鈥檚 how to tell if you have a bad attitude,(change to period, capitalize I)

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Then chances are(,) you鈥檝e got a negative attitude.

If this sounds like you(,) then you should begin to change it(get rid of 'it') at once. First(,) don play the blame game(. and capitalize I) it鈥檚 not your fault you say? Stop trying to pin the blame on others, it鈥檚 your(you're) fault. Try to locate the cause of the problem,(. and capitalize I) if you鈥檝e(you not you've) know someone who鈥檚 always negative or just generally a bad person, you should try to stop (talking of hanging out with that person) hanging or talking with that person. Try to identify the problem at the source, and stop it. %26lt;--- (rewrite that sencence as %26quot;Try to identify the source of your problem, and stop it there) Maybe your(you're) just not being (get rid of 'being')able to communicate with your friends and family,(. This will cause you to be angry, giving you the bad attitude.) causing you to be mad or angry, which is the problem of your(you're) bad attitude. Try to smile more, (. capitalize P) people will a have a more positive impression when they see you smiling. Be patient you鈥檙e (capitalize Y) not going to change your attitude overnight. You need to rewire your mind to see the positive, which will take (this takes)a lot of work and effort.
Can someone edit this?!!!!!!!?
Here's how one can tell if they have a bad attitude: if one is constantly thinking negatively, just doesn't care, or often feels angry. If you have these symptoms, chances are you have a negative attitude. Now that you know you have a negative attitude, change it!

Don't play the %26quot;blame game%26quot;- whether it's your fault or not. Don't try to pin the blame on others. Instead, locate the cause of the problem. If you can find the source, you can stop it.

Maybe you struggle to communicate with your friends and family--that could be the source of your bad attitude.

Try to smile more; you will give a more positive impression.

Remember to be patient. You can't change your attitude overnight. You need to rewire your mind to focus on the positive--and that will take a lot of effort.



Not sure if this is what you meant... But I think it reads better now.