Wednesday 21 September 2011

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here is my sentence...

%26gt;andrew is one of my special friend every time he text me I really feel so happy, and when I talk to him I fell nervous I don know why, and when the time we meet each other I feel uncomfortable, I really don know why. Uhm don get me wrong about my felling that I have from him, were just a friend that鈥檚 all. So andrew I know your nice, I thank you for being part of you to be my friend.



%26gt;Aimee is one of my closeness friend, she is one of the fullest adventurous I have been ever gather, if you want have some fun, just call aimee and she will be there, she can do anything else and she can go to the gimmicks you want to be, but sometimes when you set a time to meet each other, it takes an hour before she come on the meeting place. Aimee has didn loose a story, she always makes you smile or more than to be called she makes you laugh. So aimee stay what you are, don be change your attitude.How we know that my sentence was correct?What is your question exactly? Is it why is your sentence is incorrect? More details please.
How we know that my sentence was correct?
It's not.

%26quot;Aandrew is one of my special friend. Every time he text me I feel so happy, and when I talk to him I feel nervous. I don know why, and when the time we meet each other I feel uncomfortable, I really don know why. Uhm don get me wrong about my feeling that, I have from him. we're just friends, that鈥檚 all. So Andrew, I know your nice, and I thank you for being part of you to be my friend.%26quot; That's what it should be.













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How we know that my sentence was correct?
Both of your so called %26quot;sentences%26quot; have problems. The first sentence needs a capital %26quot;A%26quot; for Andrew because that is a proper noun. The word %26quot;friend%26quot; must be changed to %26quot;friends%26quot; because in %26quot;one of my special friends%26quot;, you are saying actually saying %26quot;one out of many%26quot; and %26quot;friends%26quot; and %26quot;many%26quot; refer to plural subjects. The word %26quot;and%26quot; or a period needs to go after %26quot;friends%26quot; because it is indicating another sentence or subject matter. These sentences are run-on sentences. Shorten them down.
Here are my corrections.



Andrew is one of my most special friends. Every time he texts me I feel so happy. When I talk to him I feel nervous and I don know why. When we met each other I felt uncomfortable and I really don know why. Uhm... don get me wrong about my fellings that I get from him. We're just friends, that鈥檚 all. So if I could talk to Andrew I'd say %26quot;Andrew, I know your nice. I thank you for being part of my life and my friend.%26quot;



%26gt;Aimee is one of my closest friends. She is one of the most adventurous people I have ever met. If you want have some fun, just call Aimee and she will be there. She will do anything. She can go wherever you want to be, but sometimes when you set a time to meet each other, it takes an hour before she come to the meeting place. She always makes you smile and makes you laugh. I would tell her %26quot;Aimee stay who you are, don change your attitude.%26quot;
The corrections wud be

andrew is one of my special friends . every time he texts me, i really feel happy. when I talk to him, I feel nervous and I don know why. when we meet each other, I feel uncomfortable.I really don know why. Uhm, don get me wrong about my feeling for him. we are just friends, that鈥檚 all. So andrew I know you aren nice.I thank you for being my friend.



%26gt;Aimee is one of my closest friends. Compared to me ,she is very adventurous. if you want have some fun, just call aimee and she will be there.she can do everything and still do the gimmicks you want to do. but sometimes when you set a time to meet each other, it takes an hour before she come on the meeting place. Aimee has lost her humor, she always makes you smile .or more than that she makes you laugh. So aimee stay where you are, don change your attitude.
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